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Crow with No Mouth: Ikkyu

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Crow With No Mouth: Ikkyu
Translated by Stephen Berg
Copper Canyon
80 pp.

Available online from Small Press Distribution.

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"something in us always wants to cry out
someone we love knows hears"
Perhaps even more than writing itself, the art of translation requires the most careful attention to nuances of sound and meaning. Crow with No Mouth: Ikkyu moves away from literal translation to "versions" of more than two hundred short poems by a 15th Century Japanese monk, the Zen master Ikkyu. Noted poet, translator and editor Stephen Berg (winner of a National Translation Center Grant from the Ford Foundation and the Columbia University Translation Prize, as well as a Guggenheim Fellowship in Poetry) brings a light touch and an emotional truth to these poems, which remain moving, funny and profound more than 500 years after their writing. While not formally exact translations -- Ikkyu's normal four-line form has been reduced to two, and the language inhabits the tone of vernacular speech -- Berg fully succeeds in recreating the emotional life of the poems for a contemporary audience.

Born in 1394, a precocious student of both Zen Buddhism and poetry, and enlightened at age 26 upon hearing the caw of a crow, Ikkyu later became known as a notorious iconoclast, scandalizing the Zen community with both his libertine ways (his poems and life were filled with wine and frequent trips to the brothel) and his impatience with formality. He railed against what he saw as the hypocrisy of the Buddhist aristocracy, accusing them of being more concerned with the raising of money and the intrigues of politics than the true path of compassion. As part of a lineage which reveled in the pleasures of the body, seeing them as just as much of the Buddhist path as meditation and asceticism, Ikkyu immersed himself in daily existence. The concreteness of his poetry feeds on observations made not only in temples and retreats but in taverns and alleys, while candidly describing sexual passion alongside the transience of bodily existence.

"Ten years of whorehouse joy I'm alone now in the mountains/the pines are like a jail the wind scratches my skin", laments one poem which neatly encapsulates the dichotomy of Ikkyu's life. Drunken escapades in the brothel often led the monk to a period of retreat, as did the bureacracy of temple life. Ikkyu writes with typical disdain for formality, "ten days running this temple all red tape/look me up if you want to in the bar whorehouse fish market." Few koans (puzzles for meditation) make their way into this slim volume, although some verses do strike at the heart of Zen philosophy ("the mind is exactly this tree that grass/without thought or feeling both disappear"). Most of the poems collected here closely observe the small miracles of life: "watching my four-year-old daughter dance/I can't break free of her", reveals a deep understanding of family ties. Two connected poems reflect on a friend's death with the same exactness:

"my friend's funeral this morning
burns inside me like my own death"

"and it breaks my heart how easily
smoke rises tonight like the thought of him"
Sex and wine are never far from Ikkyu's mind, conjured with the same attention to detail. "Her mouth played with my cock/the way a cloud plays with the sky" provides a relatively mild example of these occasionally explicit poems. In his later life, Ikkyu fell in love with a much younger, blind temple attendent, and their relationship remained one of his favorite subjects -- in forms both touching and arousing -- until his death. "A butterfly hovers in front of her face/how long will she sleep" asks one tender poem, that, like much of his verse, ties Nature to human nature. Ikkyu's other great subject, after the relationship of the mind to the body, is in fact man's relationship with Nature, but he does not reflect the classical Western view of constant struggle for dominance between the two. Human beings simply cannot affect the workings of the seasons, Ikkyu asserts: "you can't make cherry blossoms by tearing off petals/to plant only spring does that".

Berg's approach to the poetry is typified by a loose enjambment of the lines, as seen in the poem above. His condensation of four lines to two requires a voice closer to rhythms of hurried speech, as each of Ikkyu's freewheeling thoughts tumble one after another. Presented in seemingly chronological order, but without commentary, the poems in Crow with No Mouth succeed in connecting the reader, across a vast gap in time and culture, with a sharp intellect and intensely joyful master. Although a knowledge of Zen will undoubtedly allow a deeper understanding of the Buddhist concepts involved in Ikkyu's poems, their deeply universal emotional impact hasn't been muted by the passing of centuries.

-- Ryan Tranquilla

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About the Publisher: Copper Canyon Press

The past quarter century has witnessed the greatest blossoming of American poetry in history, along with the first translations of some of the world's classic literature. During this time, Copper Canyon Press has remained dedicated to publishing poetry in a wide range of styles, and from the full range of the world's many cultures. As the premier publisher in the United States devoted exclusively to poetry, Copper Canyon has been honored to publish so many talented poets from multifarious backgrounds and cultures, including Pablo Neruda, Thomas McGrath, Lucille Clifton, Carolyn Kizer, W.S. Merwin, Su Tung-p'o, Hayden Carruth, Denise Levertov, Kenneth Rexroth, Olga Broumas, David Lee and many others.

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